Abraham Ruiz

Abraham and his family goes to mexico

 

About 2 years ago my family and I hopped on a plain and went to San Nicolas, Durango, Mexico. Once we got off the last plain we got all our luggage and put it in our rented van. We drove for about 2 hours at night. Throughout the whole trip there were no lines on the road so it was pretty scary. For most of that trip it was on twist windy roads that had memorials for people that had died in an accident on the side of the road. And to top that all off we were in a lighting storm and my mother was so happy because it reminded her about how it was when she was younger. And once the drive was done the whole trip took about twelve hours from my house to my grandparents.

When we had gotten to my grandparents how it was one in the morning but he still said hi and gave him hugs. My mom started crying because it had been about 7 years ago since we had all been together.

After we had said hi and everything we went to sleep in the extra room they had. The following day we woke up late I had breakfast and looked around the house or place. Imagine a L and the L is made if five rooms two on one side and 3 on the other and the imagen a canopy kinecting them that was basically what I lived in for three weeks. All though it might seem bad it really wasn’t. The whole three weeks we still had lots of fun even though we didn’t have service. While I was looking around i found a huge wasp hive. The hive was about the size of a soccer ball. The wasps didn’t bite us at all so that we left it alone. Another thing i found were giant black moths the size of my hand I was terrified I am scared of of normal moths so then being the size of my hand wasn’t fun. So every time i was out I made sure there were no moths and if there were i would try my best to avoid them the whole time.

The second day i was there a room that was being built was done so just my brother and i moved in there. The day after my cousins from San Jose had arrived with my god father and grandmother. One of my cousins from San Jose is skinny, tall, 13 at the time and is named Yayid his brother is named Angel he is tall, dark, has a combover, and was 14. My grandmother has curly hair and looks really young for her age, my godfather is bald and was 40 at that time. My cousins had been there been there. 

1. I feel that is in the first paragraph i was successful.”For most of that trip it was on twist windy roads that had memorials for people that had died in an accident on the side of the road.”
2. I think the most difficult part about this was describing the scenery. “The setting is described using 2 senor details that help the reader imagine it”
3. It was OK. If it was in a group of 4 then it can be more helpful because then more people can give u help.